Phoenix


Give me a reason I want to smile
Give me the hope to tread, yet another mile

Too long has passivity bound me
Too long my life turbulent has been
put my sails on rest,to be peaceful I am keen

Open thine arms and let me fall
Give my tumultuous youth,a passion to think and stop

But for everything my living is a bane.
Give me all sunshine,I want no pain

My heart is frail
give me trail to follow,where love may prevail.


It's been long my eyes have been hollow
since ages they've been made to many a
tears swallow.

Reasons are many,for me to die
Give my existence a meaning
I want to try

Break all Barricades
Give me the sky
Open my wings
and let me fly!

Comments

@shwini said…
completely overwhelmin!...
January 12, 2011 at 12:31 PM
snehal said…
.....so deep,,,yet so simple...
i can so very connect to it...i just loved it!!!
January 25, 2011 at 9:01 PM
AnushreeKadam said…
wow....thats impressively powerful...it makes me fly without wings.
February 1, 2011 at 7:00 PM
Unknown said…
really very nice poem,its awesome
February 1, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Unknown said…
ur a great thinker.
February 1, 2011 at 8:37 PM
snehal bhosale said…
thanks a lot.do read the remainder of the poems.
February 1, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Rutuja said…
ohh dats jst so awsum snehal.....luvd it.......gr8 hidden talent ha...;)
February 4, 2011 at 9:28 PM
Amitaverse said…
let go your fetters and let your mind fly to greener pastures.
February 18, 2011 at 6:42 PM
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